Essays


19
Mar 10

The Indus River Valley Civilization

The two great cities of the Indus Valley civilization were Harappa and Mohenjo-Daro.  The city of Harappa was located to the north and Mohenjo-Daro to the south.  Both cities had fortresses protecting them.  These were called citadels.  The economies of the cities were not dominated by military purposes, but based on trade and agriculture. Due to the big trading economy, experts think that the power was in the hands of merchants.  In the two cities the societies were divided into classes.  At the top were the priests, then the rich merchants, and the less wealthy.  These well planned out cities were the base for the Harappa Civilization.

Throughout the time of Harappa Culture the Indus River was utilized greatly by the people of the Indus Valley.  The Indus River provided many nutrients to the valley.  The river also carried a very fertile soil called silt, which was extraordinary for agriculture.  Every year a flooding season would occur.  This season would come around about the same time every year.  The flooding brought in water and nutrients to fertilize the valley. A method called irrigation was used by the Indus Valley people to flood their valley.  The early Mesopotamians also used irrigation to flood their fertile valley.  Irrigation was a method in which people would dig ditches allowing the floods to flow inland, nourishing the farm lands. 

The Indus River was a great resource for the Indus people but it was also very destructive.  The Indus River was very unpredictable.  Sometimes the river flooded leaving disaster behind, destroying crops, and crushing cities.  But if it under flooded it would result in just as much disaster, causing dry farmlands (Indus).  “Scholars believe that changing river patterns, including a series of floods, may have caused the end of the culture” (Lal).  Although the Indus River was very destructive it was an important and greatly used resource by the Indus Valley people.

Many methods of transportation were invented by the Indus people to trade such long distances.  There is a terracotta sculpture of a loaded ox-cart found in the city of Mohenjo-Daro representing one way of transportation (Due6).  River boats with wind sails were also invented to travel up the river and transport livestock and other goods (Kenoyer).  Networks of well-built roads were built around 300 B.C. in Northern and Western India.  These roads were used for trade routes (Roads).  Bullock carts pulled by oxen were another way of transportation used along the trade routes.  This intelligence led the Indian people to bring in goods that they could not produce themselves and that led to a better lifestyle. 

            The inventions and technological advancements of the Indus Valley people were very much ahead of their ancient time.  An early canal sewage system was developed by the Indus people in the city of Mohenjo-Daro.  This sewage system of canals ran through the city removing water waste from all of the houses.  Gutters were also use by the people throughout the city to lead the waste into the canal ditches.  The people also protected themselves from the unpredictable floods by building many of their houses and buildings out of mud bricks (Kenoyer).  The Indus people not only developed roads outside of their cities, but a grid pattern system within.  This grid pattern layout consisted of many columns of roads intersecting with many rows of roads.  This made it easy for the Indus to travel throughout the city and to find their way around because at the end of every block there were intersections of roads that could lead to any place in the city.   (Nardo66).  The Indus Valley people were also one of the first civilizations to develop a near correct, functional system of weighing, measuring, and counting (Lal).  Throughout ancient history the Indus Valley civilization was one of the most technologically advanced of all the ancient civilizations.


22
Jan 10

Christmas Break

Over Christmas break I had a great time but there was also a couple negative moments.  On the first Monday I loved the great 2 feet of snow.  My brother and I went sledding a ton.  The rest of the week we built snow forts, played football, and games until Christmas eve. On Christmas day we opened our gifts.  I love Christmas but I hate how my sister acts like she’s sad because she didn’t get the exact present she wanted.  You are supposed to be thankful for what and who you have on such a special day, and celebrate the birth of Jesus.  A couple days after Christmas my siblings and I went to Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania with my mom.  First we went to my grandma and grandpas house.  The next day we got snowed in and had to wait till the next day to go visit our old neighbors.  The next day we went to my old neighbors house and had a blast.  We got to see all of our old friends and played outside almost all day.  The next day we went skeeing up in the mountains where my other friend has a house.  It was my first time skeeing and it was a blast.  At first I fell a lot and had to plow down the steep hills but as I got better I could swerve and slide stop.  My friend and his dad were amazing at skeeing they did a double black diamond.  He can  also do all the half pipes, grinding rails, jumps, and bunny hops.  His brother isn’t as good but he’s the best at jumps.  He gets so much speed and then unleashes it at the jump.  It’s awesome.  And by the end of the weekend I could do some of the jumps.  After skeeing we went to my Aunt’s house for New year’s eve.  I brought a couple of my friends so it was really fun.  We had tons of sparkling cider and roasted marshmellows by the fire place.  When the new year ball dropped on the television we went crazy everybody was banging pots and pans and I thought I was going to go deaf.  I didn’t go deaf and ended up staying up till 4 am. in the morning.  It was a great vacation but It had to end some time.  We left the day before school was going to start.  We got home and guess what?  I had a project due the next day!


18
Dec 09

Early Civilization

The Indus River was an adequate resource used by the Indus people although it was also very destructive.  Every year there would be the time of the seasonal floods in which the people would both greatly benefit and suffer from.  The Indus Valley people used a well known method for leading water inland called irrigation.  The river carried a very fertile soil called silt, which was extrodinary for agriculture if the right amount flooded the valley.  If the valley was hit harshly by over flooding, the crops would be destroyed along with much of the cities.  The very powerful Indus River was very destructive, but greatly utilized by the intelligence of the Indus people.


4
Nov 09

Squeak! Screech!

 

            Squeak!  Screech!  All I could see was a bright white SUV, and blinding yellowish- white lights heading straight for me, no the sidewalk.  What in the world was going on?

            A car had gone out of control, and I was just standing there.  Everything started to slow down, first the screeching car, then the cars following and passing, honking.  The car finally came to a stop after demolishing an enormous lamp post; sending firework looking sparks flying in the dark, night sky.  I couldn’t see anything after the crash because my eyes were still in shock by the peculiar light and sparks.  I tried to stop the entire situation in my mind and tried to think, But what to think about?  Confused I was but there had to be something I could do about the situation. 

I dialed 911.  Thinking about why I didn’t call 911 earlier, I told the operator the situation and she told me to go home.  Although going back to my house was not what I had in mind.  I had never seen anything in particular like this before.  Although this event was scary, for some reason I had a rush of overpowering adrenaline seaming through my entire body.  I ran across the street to a safe place and soon enough heard sirens.  The sirens became louder and louder until my ears were starting to hurt.  A large fire truck, 3 police cars, and 2 ambulances rushed to the spot of the crash.  When they pulled out the man and place him on the stretcher, all of my adrenaline rushed out of my body, and the frightening site went in.  A man was all bruised up and probably in serious condition.  I couldn’t take this any more. 

What were my parents thinking?  OH NO!  My parents were probably worried sick about me.  I booked home as fast as I could and opened my garage door.  I walked in and expecting to get yelled at big time.  All they did was hug me for the longest time.

            It was a long, bright night, and many things happened that may have changed my life forever.  It was one of the most frightening, and exciting nights of my life.  These kinds of odd situations can change your life for the better or worse.  I chose the better path by making myself more aware and self- conscious about strange situations.


4
Nov 09

Squeak! Screech!

   Squeak!  Screech!  All I could see was a bright white SUV, and blinding yellowish- white lights heading straight for me, no the sidewalk.  What in the world was going on?

            A car had gone out of control, and I was just standing there.  Everything started to slow down, first the screeching car, then the cars following and passing, honking.  The car finally came to a stop after demolishing an enormous lamp post; sending firework looking sparks flying in the dark, night sky.  I couldn’t see anything after the crash because my eyes were still in shock by the peculiar light and sparks.  I tried to stop the entire situation in my mind and tried to think, But what to think about?  Confused I was but there had to be something I could do about the situation. 

I dialed 911.  Thinking about why I didn’t call 911 earlier, I told the operator the situation and she told me to go home.  Although going back to my house was not what I had in mind.  I had never seen anything in particular like this before.  Although this event was scary, for some reason I had a rush of overpowering adrenaline seaming through my entire body.  I ran across the street to a safe place and soon enough heard sirens.  The sirens became louder and louder until my ears were starting to hurt.  A large fire truck, 3 police cars, and 2 ambulances rushed to the spot of the crash.  When they pulled out the man and place him on the stretcher, all of my adrenaline rushed out of my body, and the frightening site went in.  A man was all bruised up and probably in serious condition.  I couldn’t take this any more. 

What were my parents thinking?  OH NO!  My parents were probably worried sick about me.  I booked home as fast as I could and opened my garage door.  I walked in and expecting to get yelled at big time.  All they did was hug me for the longest time.

            It was a long, bright night, and many things happened that may have changed my life forever.  It was one of the most frightening, and exciting nights of my life.  These kinds of odd situations can change your life for the better or worse.  I chose the better path by making myself more aware and self- conscious about strange situations.